turlough: purple crocuses ((mcr) sweet boy)
turlough ([personal profile] turlough) wrote in [community profile] angelsandkings 2011-10-09 12:45 am (UTC)

It's lovely!! I love the beginning with them theorizing and squabbling and being so excited about the aliens. And how Gerard is only scared for about two minutes before his excitement and joy breaking through when he wakes up and meet Pillow. You really make me see why Pillow is so drawn to him, Gerard's like this shining beacon of excitement and wonder and love.

I also love the glimpses we get of Pillow's world and family. They're strange and alien and absolutely fascinating.

You make their mutual exploration seem so natural and the way it leads to sex almost inevitable. And the sex itself is so wonderfully hot and well, joyful.

The morning after really brings home how young Gerard is here. His kind of wistful crush is so sweet and plausible and his reaction when he discovers the bracelet is totally adorable and so right.

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